First pose – stronger silhouette and get his weight over his left leg – on our right, but his left (the on that looks like it should be carrying the weight). Make it more evident that he is studying the racket – maybe he could pluck the strings or something. I thought he was looking off screen. Watch the weight and silhouettes throughout. I like the exploration of attitude and thought. He anticipates that first swing pretty early and gets good very quickly.
First pose – stronger silhouette and get his weight over his left leg – on our right, but his left (the on that looks like it should be carrying the weight). Make it more evident that he is studying the racket – maybe he could pluck the strings or something. I thought he was looking off screen. Watch the weight and silhouettes throughout. I like the exploration of attitude and thought. He anticipates that first swing pretty early and gets good very quickly.
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